I suspect all us writers have them. Background characters who serve to fill blanks, the waitress, the guy in the street who was in the way, the old lady who saw something suspicious.


They rarely get names, but occasionally a speaking part . . .


And like the crepe myrtle and the pecan seedling peeking out of my creeping jasmine, they are often doomed simply by being in the wrong place at the wrong time.

Poor things. Too close to the foundation of my house.

And sometimes, like this oak sapling, they threaten the plant you intend to have there and are removed with sorrow, or extreme prejudice.

How much page time the literary volunteers get varies according to the authors’ needs.

I tend to minimize. David Webber gives them brief histories and aspirations before gorily shredding them in battle. I think most writers are in between, but that’s according to what their story needs.

The volunteer trips and falls, and nice POV character helps them up. Or she’s in a bad mood and is rude to the little old lady. Or the pretty girl scorns the hero who stomps off and does something stupid . . .

Volunteer characters are so useful . . . and every once in a while they’re like the oak sapling that grew sideways to get out of the shade of the older tree . . . now gone, and suddenly you notice that you’ve got a really interesting  tree that you ought clear the brush out from around and show him off to the neighbors.

And for a writer, those quirky odd characters that somehow pop up now and then, are so fun to run with . . . even though you had no intention of writing about someone like that!

4 responses to “Volunteers”

  1. About 10K into current WIP: had to write a line saying one of the leads rattles off the list of all the people he met in the previous scene, introducing them to his kinsmen. About 25K-30K: same lead has to recognize two of those guys guarding him in a situation where he can’t do anything for him. I didn’t have my cell phone with me, so I named them out of an Archaeology Today on my parents’ coffee table. About 35K-39K: the same two guys are helping same lead escape from a bad situation and go into hiding. It was at this point that I went back and wrote the two guys’ names into the introduction scene at 10K and another scene shortly before it. I think one of them is going to die fighting in the climax and the other is going to metaphorically remain behind on the Titanic, but we’ll see.

  2. Alas, poor Red Shirts! We knew them well . . .

  3. Take notes in the form of a character list. You need to know the name of the red-haired gossip on page 17 when she starts to gossip again on 271

  4. I tend to have more characters than stories to put them in. Sometimes they just show up in scene. Others, they ruminate and fermentate into fine vintages.

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