*You guys know we talked about doing a shared world.  We went with a whole continent so that Dave can have his jungle and I can have my big city with diners.  We’re working on a contract which we should have in a week or two (and yes, we’ll post it for your enlightenment although we haven’t decided yet if anyone not in the group can play.  OTOH if it’s very successful, we’ll inevitably enlarge it.  For now, here’s the second chapter of Elf Blood, book one of Risen Atlantis. And for now it is ©Sarah A. Hoyt 2013.  All rights reserved.  Do not copy, distribute or otherwise disseminate without the author’s name, and a link to this page.  You do not have the right to alter it.  You do not have the right to claim it as yours. For permission to do anything other than quote it for review or recommendation purposes, email Goldportpress@gmail.com. This is a work of fiction, all coincidence between it and real people place or events is assuredly imaginary.*

Previous chapter here.

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IV

The “something respectable but cheap” I bought to wear to the party was not so cheap it wouldn’t be usable again.  It was cheap for the man who carried a thousand magus in his pocket, but it was really just an update of my little black dress which had grown a disreputable brownish color with age.  Taken care of, this would see me through formal and semi-formal occasions for many years to come.

I was mildly satisfied with that – if with nothing else – as I took a taxi to the Parthalan compound.  It was at the top of one of the seven hills, which figured, since all the best enclaves were atop one of the seven hills – scoured clean by the submerging of Atlantis, and emergent again, millennia later with only the remnants of the temples that had once stood on them, they were now landscaped, sculpted, and covered in the best mansions in town.  Far above the smog and the crowd, they had the advantage of being close to everything while yet being isolated, each of the hills almost a small town onto itself, high above Pomae.

Before I set out, I’d determined that the Parthalans lived in a compound – a maze of gardens and buildings, a world onto itself.  This did not prepare me for the size when we pulled up in front of it.  The wall outside seemed to go on for ten city blocks, and that was the size of block on this hill, known as the golden hill.  I thought that Mudhole would fit three times over inside those high, white-marble walls.

From behind the walls came the sound of laughter, the tinkle of glasses knocked together, and I thought that the driver could go on through the drive way that unrolled from the gate inward, beneath trees that gave a good impression of being centenary, though I was sure they couldn’t be.  Old Ciar must have demolished ten or twelve mansions to get this place built, no more than fifty years ago.

But just as I leaned forward to tell the cabbie to drive on inside, something ran in front of the gate, across the drive.  I can’t swear to it, but I thought it was a unicorn.  The cabbie pulled his hand brake and turned around and looked at me, “If you were thinking I might drive on in, Miss, you are wrong.  One of those things slamming into the side, my cab would be gone and it’s my livelihood.  And I know better, I do, miss, than trying to take elves to court.  I wouldn’t go in there for enough money to keep me without working the rest of my life.”

I didn’t say anything, just nodded and got out and paid him.  Before I turned away to enter the gate, he said, “I’d be careful in there, yourself.  You know they do unspeakable things to young women, they do.  Their long life is purchased at a price, but they get jaded in all that time, and they do things…”

I’d never been sure if this rumor was true, though it stood to reason that yes, elves would become jaded with normal pleasures.  And it was a known thing they had different tastes than humans anyway – more… broad or perhaps more cruel.  But none of this was something I knew for a fact, and I also knew the things they said about half-elves, and none applied to me.  Oh, I had my own suspicions about elves, and you couldn’t convince me to marry one, any more than you could convince me to —  No, forget that.  I was going to visit this hill for good or ill.

The guards at the gate stopped me, but I said I’d been invited by Ard Parthalan, and that I was considering the post of secretary.  They traded a look over my head, which I was quite sure I didn’t want to analyze, but they let me through.

There must have been a mile between me and the house, and by the time I got there, I was feeling it.  It’s stupid to do a mile in high heels, only of course, I hadn’t known I’d be walking that far.  There were scenes of merriment all around.  In what might be an ornamental lake, but then again might also very well be a pool, a group of people were swimming around and laughing.  They looked very young and I almost swear I saw one of them lift a fish tail.  I did not stop.

Further on in a glade, a beautiful, blond elf maiden was languishing in the arms of a pan-creature who had almost got her dress off.  She was saying “Yes, yes, you big hairy beast,” so I presumed it was consensual and I walked on.

Other party-groups looked more conventional, like the group of people dancing beneath lights wound through the tree above them.  The music was beguiling, but I walked on.

On all the way to the house, with its broad marble stair case.  From inside it came more music, more laughter, the sound of voices, and the sound of silverware and dishes.

I was walking up the steps, when I met with Ardghal Parthalan coming down.   Here, in his father’s house, he looked more at ease, or perhaps he simply put on a good party face.  He was wearing evening attire, but the way elves wore it.  I didn’t know how much of it was real and how much was glamour, but if it was real, he was wearing enough wealth to buy the city of Pomae in the diamonds forming fantastic dragon motifs all over his pale blue jacket.

He said, “Miss Smith!” and extended both hands to me, as though we were long lost friends.  “I’m so glad you came.”  He looked around.  “Where did you park?”

Apparently he thought I had a car, though arguably he’d given me enough to buy one if I’d gone used and small.  “The cab dropped me off at the entrance,” I said.

“Oh,” he said, and looked conscience stricken.  He looked up the drive.  “You mean you walked?  You should have had the guards call me.  I never meant for you to do that.”

I shook my head.  “It doesn’t matter.”

“Well, I’m glad you are here.  I was going to–  But never mind that, let me introduce you to my father and get you some food and drink.”

He took me by the arm, as though we’d been old friends, and I could practically see the rumors forming as we walked in.  I tried not to mind too much.  If they thought I was his mistress, they wouldn’t think I was a detective.  And it’s not rare at all for full elves to keep half elves as mistresses.  We have the advantage of being a lot more fertile than pure bloods, and sometimes elves don’t care, so long as they can have children, each generation becoming a little less Un’ uruh as they mix with purer blood.  Again, if they thought I was his mistress, they would be a lot more relaxed in front of me.

I found myself pulled through a press of people, human and elf both, all impeccably attired, introduced here and there casually with “This is Miss Smith.  I’m hoping she’ll become my secretary.”

Some people winked or grinned, but only two leered, and only one – an elderly elf who was probably hiding satyr legs beneath his pants and hooves in his shoes, not to mention horns under his carefully styled hair – said, “I just bet you are, dear boy.”

Ard took me near where an elf-couple was holding court, standing in the middle of a circle of friends.  I could tell they were middle aged, which for an elf might mean a couple hundred years.  Most wouldn’t be able to, but I knew elves.  Yes, they both looked as young as Ard, as young as myself, but there was a staidness to their gestures, a way of looking out at the world that proclaimed their age.

“Father,” Arden said.  “This is Miss Smith.  I told you about her.”

His father, who looked a lot like him turned around, captured both my hands and, before I could stop him, gave me a resounding kiss on each cheek.  “Well, welcome to the family my dear.”

Ard looked startled, then pained.  “No, father, I mean to hire Miss Smith as my secretary.  We’re not…”

“That’s what I meant,” his father said and gestured broadly with a cocktail glass.  “Our little family of employer and employee, and all the merry troop, right?  Welcome Kassia, Miss Smith.”

I realized this was one incredibly drunken elf, and I wondered how.  Most of them have no reaction at all to our alcohol.  It would take being far more Un’uruh that even I was to get that completely gone on alcohol.  But Ciar – though I couldn’t do a scan of his power here in this crowded environment – couldn’t be Un’uruh.  He couldn’t.  Not and be the king of his hill.

But Ard had managed to extricate me from his father, and was presenting me to an older elf lady, a slim creature with dark hair and beguiling features.  It took being as much elf as I was to see she was past her first bloom.  “And this is Xenia, my step mother.”

A cool hand was put forward for my squeezing and a cool look raked me over.  Then seemed to dismiss me as being of any importance.  “Very welcome, I’m sure.”

Apparently marrying good forest elf stock was a thing in this family.  And of course she knew I wasn’t.  Marrying Un’uruh might be all right since he could probably buy her hill ten times over, but it didn’t justify paying too much attention to un’uruh without the advantages of wealth or place.

Ard dragged me away, procured me something that tasted like fruit punch but had an edge of alcohol, and a plate of little rolls and littler cakes.  “You can eat, of course,” he said.  “It’s all safe for mor–  for normal people tonight, since we have several friends of the family in.”

“It would be safe for me, anyway,” I said, and he raised an eyebrow, but said nothing.

Instead, he waited, making small talk while I ate, then said, “We’ll introduce you to the family, now.  I was going to look for Chara, for my wife, when I bumped into you.  But I’ll try to introduce you to my brother Flaith – Flaithri, if we can find him – and to my sister.  Her name is Treasa.  You’ll like her.”

He dragged me out into the cool perfumed night.  The compound was very extensive, well beyond the things I’d glimpsed from the path, and they must have done something with magic to have exotic flowers growing here, in the climate of Pomae, and all of them blooming at the same time.

We found his brother dancing in a clearing not far off.  There was a band playing the thing they call elf-jazz, though how you can have a sensual and deep music, that cleaves your soul in two, when the instruments used are mostly flute, I’ve never understood.  I suspect glamour.  But then I always do.

Flaithri was as tall as Ardghal, but dark.  It was clear his mother was Ardghal’s step mother.  He responded to the introduction with a wolfish grin and said, “Well, I hope you decide to give Ard a chance.  He rather needs someone to keep track of him.  Chara—” He shrugged.  “It doesn’t do to speak ill—” He stopped again.  “Well, my partner is waiting.”  And he went back to his dance.

We found Treasa walking the path towards the house, carrying her high heels.  She smiled and nodded at the introduction and said she was very happy to meet me, but I said nothing.  You see, she was clearly the elf-woman who’d been with the pan-thing back there.

“Did you see Chara?” Ardghal asked.  “I thought she’d be by the pool, but she wasn’t.”

“She said something about wanting some time for herself,” Treasa gave a weird malicious smile, as though this should have meant something more.  “I saw her walking that way.”

She pointed down a winding, narrower path leading deep into the forest.

“Ah,” Ardghal said, his brow clearing, as though all were explained.  “The warm pool.”

We walked down the winding path, under many-colored lanterns, in the scent of flowers.  One thing you could say.  The Parthalans treated their guests right.

But after a while I thought I detected a weird scent beneath the flowers.  It didn’t exactly disturb me because it was hard to pinpoint, but when the path ended in a broad clearing with another of those might be lakes or swimming pools, the smell became unbearable.  Blood.

“Blood,” I said.

I wasn’t speaking to anyone.  Ardghal had let go of my arm.  He ran into the clearing and knelt by what I at first took to be a bundle of sodden rags.  “Chara!  Chara!” he screamed.

The bundle turned out to be a dark haired, olive-skinned elf-woman.  In life, she must have been very beautiful, bit it was hard to judge because she had been stabbed multiple times, her clothes were torn, and there was blood everywhere.  To make things worse, it looked like her chest and part of her side had been eaten.

13 responses to “Elf Blood — Free Novel — Chapter 4”

  1. […] As a girl, I was kicked in the chest by a horse. He wasn’t very big, but neither was I, and the next thing I remember is looking up at the blue sky wondering how the world had tilted. I tell you that to illustrate the reaction I had just now to a google search result. I typed “victims in young adult fiction” in, and the first result on the page was “Rape Book Lists – Goodread Lists about: YA Violence & Abuse Novels, Best Traumatized Heroines, Male Characters You Would Run From If They Tried To Date You.”     Someone made a list of the Best Traumatized Heroines? and a list of rape books, like this is a huge thing that we all want to read about? I had a moment where I literally could not catch my breath.     I am a survivor of abuse as a child, and again as an adult. It’s not something I talk about often. I’m not bringing it up here for any reason other than this: as a young adult victim, the last thing in the world I would have willingly read were books that discussed in detail actions/feelings, heck, ANYTHING that would have reminded me of what happened. They would have triggered my flashbacks that took me years to come to grip with. I realize this is one experience, and perhaps there are idiosyncratic responses, but I am inclined to think that most true victims don’t want to read about scenarios that resemble their traumas.     So who is reading these books? There are 290 books, voted on by 240 people, on the Goodreads Best Traumatized Heroine page. A few rows below it is a list called The Real Bodice Rippers. Despite the search string that brought me here, these are not YA books. But there is a list called YA Violence and Abuse novels. It contains 341 books voted on by 436 users. The subtitle is “Teen books dealing with physical/emotional/psychological/verbal/sexual abuse, bullying, guns, gangs, dating violence, rape, etc.” Do we really think kids who are in these situations are reading about this? No…     I think what is happening, and I’m not sure how I’d confirm this, is that teachers, publishers, whoever drives the impetus, has decided that children OUGHT to read about these topics. Because, it happens to someone, somewhere, right? Girls should know all about rape, because it’s an issue. And that is where my problem lies. Yes, rape is an issue. And many other forms of assault and abuse. But reading a fiction novel glorifying that is not the appropriate response, a doctor, parental support, and a therapist is. Teens, especially, seem to be drawn to the dark, the abyss, to look into it and some of them just let go and fall into that darkness. Do we really want a rape victim to become our daughter’s heroine? Why not a book about a girl who had been taught to defend herself, and thus never became that victim?     If we want to teach our children that rape and abuse are terrible, and why I am not sure when it is so self-evident, then perhaps rather than emphasizing a passive protagonist who is suffering afterwards, we give them examples of what they could have done to escape harm. I took my daughter at the age of 12 through a hunter safety course, and taught her how to shoot. I taught her how to deflect and deflate bullies with words and humor, a tack that will work well on drunks and overly aggressive but not insane males. Yes, there are horrible things that happen to children who are too young to defend themselves, through no fault but that of an evil human being. No, we do not need to make lists of books with the Best Traumatized Heroine.     We do not need to explain, at length and in detail, what happened to those fictional victims. One book on the list, Living Dead Girl, got this review “The author draws you in with her unique and just plain strange writing style, despite being weird it’s also very effective. It takes us deep inside the mind of a person who has not only suffered extreme physical and sexual abuse (though there’s been plenty of that) but has also been so psychologically damaged that her hope is only for death to come swiftly, she is so desperate that she is even willing to sacrifice a young girl to make her suffering end.” Another reviewer points out that there is no redemption in this book, that it only exists as torture porn.     The vast majority of teens will never experience something that terrible. But we hold up all these examples and say “here, this could happen to you!” Is this a healthy thing to do to teen girls? And most especially if they are given no choice, and required to read them, for a true victim it could cause them to have to relive horrors. For an innocent bystander, it gives them a thrill at the expense of those who are not in need of fiction to help them cope. It does not teach them to avoid those behaviours, they are teenagers, they need parental guidance, strong, mature role models, and the education to defend themselves. Teen boys don’t need to think that all boys do is harm girls. They need to know that gallantry and chivalry need not die out.     I grew up reading adventure books. I started out with Westerns, and moved on to ER Burroughs, and then read pretty much anything that would stand still long enough for me to see. I read a lot… and very little of it YA. There was some that was age-inappropriate. I was allowed to read ERB’s Mars series by a librarian who wouldn’t let me even go into the Adult collection at the age of ten. I can remember being thoroughly grossed out by VC Andrews’ Flowers in the Attic, and that, for all the disgusting themes in it, is tame compared to some of the so-called “Young Adult” books I found today.     It’s time we took back those shelves. I urge you, whoever you are, to consider writing something that isn’t about glorifying evil, abuse, and the terrors no child should ever face. I am not naive enough to think that none do – I have been there, literally – but I do not think that novels about those experiences are kind, necessary, and by all that is good, ought never to be assigned reading for a class of impressionable minds. What has happened to books full of adventure, plots that edify and amuse, characters that children will want to emulate in their honor, duty, and sense of resolve? Have they been buried under a wave of books that shallowly address “the issues?” Who decides what is an issue? Give children choices. Good books, decent books, where pain is real, not so abysmal they cannot see hope for recovery, dreams, and a real life.     I say to you who have lived through the valley of shadows: do not embrace victimhood, I implore you, be a survivor. Instead of looking back at what happened, dauntlessly face forward and say “what can I do?” Where will my dreams take me? I can tell you my dreams have brought me places I never expected, and I have happiness. I’ve written stories about some of my pain, but mostly I write about hope, and strength, and honor. I wrote a story for my daughter, about a girl who is given a great responsibility, and even though gods pursue her, she protects the little ones in her care. She doesn’t give up, she just presses onward. This is what we need to give our young ones – the strength to keep going, not the filth to wallow in.     I’ll leave you with a poem created by an anonymous man who fears for his grandchildren’s future:     Keep an open mind they said. Don’t shut your ears , don’t close your head… And then the open mind collapses, shedding sense and nerve synapses Fact and fiction soon enmeshed, that tenuous attachment to reality unfleshed And then we sit and wonder why, all we knew as good has died.   UPDATE: Chapter Four of Elf Blood over at Mad Genius Club. […]

  2. Well. That’s quite the introduction to Mrs. Parthalan.

  3. Ooo! Murder mystery with elves. Not to mention that the Hard Boiled Detective _is_ the Dame.

    1. The dame is the private dick…

  4. The fairy tale talks about a woman red as blood and white as snow. But woman or elf, don’t take it literally. Not a flattering look.

    1. When it says “blood everywhere,” is the blood red?

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          Green blood is the mixture of blue blood and yellow blood.

  5. So. Ard is no longer married. Now he can marry this “secretary” and the sacrifice can proceed . . . _Someone_ is going to be upset that the Hard Boiled Dick-Dame isn’t going to co-operate. And is no doubt going to prove very difficult to kill.

  6. […] UPDATE: New chapter up at Mad Genius Club […]

  7. Did I miss Chapter 3? This is chapter 4, and the link goes to Chapter 2. The last week has been one where I’ve forgotten EVERYTHING, so I probably did…

    1. Grumble. I thought I’d changed the link.

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