It’s important for readers to be able to distinguish the special characteristics of all the meaningful players in your story, not just to recognize them when they show up, but as yet one more channel to provide potential insight into their character, thoughts and their likely actions.

Of course, you can construct your “man of mystery”[tm] whether as a main or bit part as an opaque personality, but really, isn’t it more fun to allow your mad quirkery out to play instead?

I look for what involuntarily engages such a character’s attention, something his brain says “Ooh! Shiny!” about, even if he sees it inconveniently at a moment of peril, when the notice thrusts itself distractingly upon him.

Think of the evil genius, stopped in mid-gloat when she notices her captive is wearing the latest fashion, and she wants to know where she got it.

Or the sinister dog-fancier, distracted by an unusual coat color on a stray, so that he spins around from his path to check it out, abandoning his frantic hostile pursuit of the hero for something more important.

Maybe they sing, Barbershop enthusiasts, and gravitate to listen to a quartet performing when they should have been running away instead.

Maybe the villain is made suspicious about the bona fides of the hero because he detects an improbable claim — “he can’t have actually found the Holy Grail”. (“But if he did, I want a look!”)

A really savvy protagonist can construct a suitable specimen of obsession as a planned subversion of a susceptible suspect, as a lure or a distraction.

I bet you have some examples of this sort of thing, either ones you’ve created or ones you’ve admired from others. Come share in the comments!

7 responses to “Characters with… hobbies”

  1. Paul (Drak Bibliophile) Howard Avatar
    Paul (Drak Bibliophile) Howard

    Barbara Hambly’s Ysidro mentioned that many vampires had hobbies and that he disliked his fellow vampires that didn’t have hobbies.

    Of course, Ysidro didn’t mention his hobby and James Asher didn’t ask what Ysidro’s hobby was.

  2. I always felt that Peter Wimsey’s rare book collection was the most fun of the wish fulfillment components his creatrix built into him.

  3. In the fanfic I was working with a character that functioned as a combat heavy. But the other thing about her was she was the grounds keeper for a set of gardens known for their serene beauty. What hit me, eventually, was that was where the character’s real heart was. Which completely refrained the entire character for me. Her combat heavy was only a duty, something to be gotten through, rather than something she loved and enjoyed.

    Had another character who was in a field where physical beauty was important. When she looked at someone, she did not just notice what they looked like, but also what they used to look like. She didn’t see an old woman; she saw someone who had once been a striking, if not precisely beautiful, woman, worn and drawn taut by time and demands of her station.

    What they care about changes what they see, and what they take note of. The sewer notices the cut of the dress. The gardner and farmer notice the dirt under, or not, if the nails. The tinkerer has the faint yellow patch on their shirt. The laundress notices it and knows they’re careless with oil and either sighs or wants to strangle them.

    1. “What they care about changes what they see, and what they take note of.”

      Yes!

  4. I have a character who is always reading in her down time, it doesn’t matter the subject. Books to her equal normal, comfort. Her partner is an amateur photographer and likes to play with tiny trees in his down time.

  5. Rex Stout’s Nero Wolfe and his orchids

    Lawrence Block’s Keller and his stamp collection.

  6. Ah hobbies. I can go on at length on them. In fact — I have.

    https://writingandreflections.substack.com/p/hobbies-on-the-side

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