You finished your book. The main character(s) have a happy ending, the bad guy or antagonist has been stopped or defeated, and readers can close the cover with a contented smile because all is well and the story ends here.

Or does it? What if … It doesn’t?

For the western Christian church, the 12th day of Christmas has come. The three magi visit, leave gifts, and … the story continues, albeit with a large missing segment of time. For believers, the Christmas tree has been undecorated and disposed of (or taken apart and stored for the next year), the decorations come off the house, thank you notes are written, and the holiday ends. The passing of the feast is lamented, or greeted with relief, depending on one’s persuasion. Eastern Christians are just now getting started. Non-Christians shrug and go about their own religious or other years. But the story behind the holiday doesn’t stop.

If the Christian Gospels were novels, no publisher would take them without major re-writes or serious editing. The story leaps from Jesus’ birth and toddlerhood to his ministry as an adult, and no one blinks*. We writers can’t always get away with that kind of jump, unless we have a “signs the MC is a chosen one” prologue or prequel, and then start the main story. We might be able to jump a few years, and allude to them in passing.

This can work very well when we have characters that are settling down at the end of a story. The next installment shows them with a family, notes changes, and introduces the new antagonist or other plot elements. Perhaps the bad guy all though dead and buried has come back … with friends. Or the new king isn’t quite as good of a manager as the protagonist and her allies had thought. Or “the last dragon” wasn’t, and now the MC has a family to feed and defend, and needs to think very hard about chasing off after strange reptiles.

What about you as the author? You might look at the possibilities and decide that while the story goes on in your head, and maybe even in your snippet and scraps file, the official story has reached a close. This is how the Cat Among Dragons series ends. The protagonist gets a “happily for the foreseeable future,” and the cover closes. Yes, her life will go one, with joys and heartbreaks, misadventures and business deals. I wanted to end on a high note, or at least “we made it, we’re together, and life is not all that bad, really” note.

Too, you the writer might no longer be in the head or heart space to do more in that world. Quit while you are ahead, leave readers mostly satisfied, and allow them to spin stories for themselves. We’re probably all read or heard of a series that went on too long, after the author lost interest but the publisher, or bill-collectors, or rabidfans, insisted that more stories come forth.

I’m not sure readers really want that. Some stories can stop, with tales untold and worlds yet unexplored. Others need to continue, and should, even if you skip a little. The core Familiar Tales books have a 5-7 year gap between them, because readers don’t need all the mundane life of two shadow mages who also have to pay bills, take drippy-nosed kids to school or the doctor, mow the lawn, shovel the walks, buy still more shoes for two fast-growing boys … And occasionally fight monsters, break curses, and tap-dance around land mines and in-laws.

Don’t be afraid to have loose connections and gaps between specific stories, so long as critical ends get tied off, and there are a few references for readers to know any really important bits in between.

*Some people filled in the missing years. Some of those fill-ins are entertaining, some head-scratching (Jesus went to India and studied with Buddhist monks? Huh?) and others got dropped over the years. A few became popular enough to appear in art, frequently. And in Christmas carols (“Cherry Tree Carol”).

20 responses to “Twelfth Night, Epiphany: The Story Still Goes On”

  1. I’ve read some of those “lost books” and let’s just say I don’t believe the Son of God struck down other boys in his town for besting him in a game. If I had the time I would try to track down where those stories came from – they have hints of other religions’ mythologies – but I’m good with knowing that he likely had a normal life and learned his father’s trade before going out and doing his Father’s work.

    1. Some of the “lost books” seem to be aimed at explaining the later hostility (apparent hostility) between Jesus and the Jewish leaders. Others, well, I used them in Protestant Religion class to boggle the students.

      1. Do you mean something I’ve heard called the Infancy Gospels?

        1. Yes, and a few others. The Golden Legend also has a number of the Marian traditions in it.

    2. The particular story you cite has kind of a Krishna vibe to me, but also don’t have time to dig into it, so…

    3. I can remember movies from the 70’s that suggested that Christ and at least some of the disciples made it to the New World, somehow, and preached the Gospel to the Indians. They tended to be on the same level as films about Bigfoot, UFOs, and Noah’s Ark being found on Ararat.

      On an odd side note, while my father (born 1928 in PA Dutch Country) didn’t believe that, according to him it used to be taken for granted that the American Indians were supposed to have known about Christianity in some way or another prior to Columbus.

      1. Possibly from stories of St. Brendan the Navigator. Who supposedly sailed westward and some have said discovered America. Note: This is NOT in his official write up. So that’s why I’m saying ‘stories about’ vs. what they officially know he did.

  2. My theory is that, after he was twelve and pulled that “running away during Passover” stunt, Jesus found himself grounded until he was thirty—at which point, he started his ministry and the gospels picked back up again.

    1. Funny mental image, although the “My time has not yet come” line at Cana suggests to me that when to start his public life was His decision.

    2. I can completely see that exact thing. Not that my parents ever told Sib and I words to that effect, noooooo …

  3. The kings only just made it to the manger, so I plan to leave the Nativity set up for a couple of days more. Didn’t put the tree up this year but when I do, usually take it down over MLK weekend.

    I’ve gotten glimpses of stuff the hero’s cousin got up to in before the last chapter (more of an epilogue) of my last book, and after the second to last chapter (where main plot ends), but haven’t turned into anything solid yet.

    1. Also, I saw a commercial where a character kind of mocked the idea of taking the decorations down the day after Christmas, so maybe the culture is shifting a bit on this point.

      1. OTOH, I saw Valentine’s Day stuff on December 9, and Easter stuff yesterday so it’s not dead yet.

    2. Go for it! Take it down on Candlemas!

      1. Some years I have! Think I’m wasvwhen i was very sick over MLK weekend.

      2. MomRed said no. So the decorations came down today. We’re the last ones on the block.

        1. Mine did, too. Decorations down, Christmas music CDs switched, and the Epiphany prayer pronounced at the door.

        2. I don’t do exterior decorations beyond a front door wreath (which i think came down earlier than the tree, the years i held out til Candlemas), so it’s less embarrassing if I am slower off the mark than the rest of the neighborhood.

  4. Well, the house lights are turned off, but I have yet to get them down (my right Achilles tendon has been aching too much to run up and down on the ladder).

    Our tradition has been to leave the tree up until the weekend after New Year’s Day. Only once have we taken it down right after Christmas – when we were going to Disneyland that week.

    (It does always stay around for quite a while afterwards, in a sense – I trim the branches off and cut it into firewood for the pit. Although pine, give the logs a year or two in this climate and they’re perfectly fine to burn without smoking out the neighbors. Waste not, want not!)

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