The problem with writing outré sf/fantasy is it’s entirely like writing for the Babylon Bee these days – today’s outré is merely tomorrow’s reality. Indeed – had I fictionalized the uprising against the Mullahs in Iran, the uncovering of massive fraud in ‘daycare’ in Minnesota, and taking out a dictator from Venezuela – all happening roughly at once, my audience would have rolled their eyes and told me I ought to be more plausible. I think I’ll have to write cozy fiction in which nothing disturbs the even tenor of our lives.

Now, it seems likely – if you dig deep enough- that there may be some links between all of these, and if you dig deep enough, not tenuous ones. But it’s reality. No-one has to suspend disbelief to be sucked into it. ‘It just is, the way Mount Everest is and Alma Cogan isn’t’ (as Monty Python’s Professor of Logic put it). As a writer, you do not have that luxury. The reader needs to willingly suspend disbelief. They may know it is fiction (I know at least one author who got accused of giving away magical secrets… they made up) but the reader is ‘willing to go along with it’, and become absorbed in your imaginary creation. There are a number of tools for this but single most important is the realistic character. The character who is ‘someone they know or have met’ – who just happens to be in a sf/fantasy setting. If you like, fantasy is often the unrealistic happening to the realistic, and them dealing with it, realistically.

The second ‘trick’ is just not to throw too many unconnected strange things at your reader at once (unlike reality). Sf/fantasy has to make sense, be ‘logical’ no matter how weird – This is how you end up with magic being hard work, instead of, well, just magic. So: no 3 crazy events on top of each other, not apparently connected, is fine reality… but not for fiction.

6 responses to “How to hang disbelief”

  1. I especially like your definition of fantasy in that next to last paragraph.

    My long-suffering husband reacts to my predictions of what will happen next in the plot of any movie/show we’re watching on TV at night by surprise at my being able to predict so well the next event or the various outcomes, that is, the formulaic nature of the story beats and how the obstacle of Act 2 will become the necessary clue of Act 4, etc. While it’s true that “professional” story structures are useful and necessary, it’s better to move beyond that predictability with (plausible) whimsy, cunning, the unexpected perception, the over the top challenge, and so forth, to make the structural formats your own, with your own signature.

    After all, what are disaster movies but stories of the world blowing up over and over again, and louder and more dire each time, until salvation (or destruction) occurs at the end? Religions have no problem with stories like that. If it happens in the real world, let’s embrace it, shaking our heads though we may the while.

    (Or provide moral sanity, comic commentary, or comforting relief as an antidote, depending on your taste.)

    1. I’m reminded of an observation about the TV series Supernatural; the result of solving the dilemma of the current season only introduces the even worse dilemma of the next.

  2. *Tim Powers excepted.

  3. I was describing the Battle of Leipzig/Battle of Nations to students, and said, “OK, this part here has to be history, because NO fiction editor would let anyone get away with this in a novel plot.”

    “Truth is stranger than fiction, because fiction has to make sense.” Rod Machado (aviation humorist and safety specialist) probably paraphrasing Oscar Wilde and a few others.

  4. “Fiction must be plausible. Reality just happens.”

    I have read that the best science fiction is built around one ‘What if?’ What if one significant thing about the universe was different? How would that affect people, society, the economy? Establish your Impossible Thing (or just a few related Impossible Things) early in the story and then stop with them. Too many Maguffins overload the reader’s suspension of disbelief. If every crisis and plot twist is resolved by the author pulling Yet Another rabbit out of his ass, there is no room for conflict and tension. There is no logic to the plot, just an endless string of miracles.

    I credit myself with this one, because I never saw it before I wrote it:

    “As an author, yours is the god-like power to make anything happen, to make your characters and your world say and do and be anything you want. If you abuse that power, if you make crazy, arbitrary, random senseless shit happen for no logical reason, your story will suck.”

  5. I really like looking at the places where reality didn’t make sense, and trying to find a way to describe it so that it does– my family has a whole game of describing things in deliberately strange ways.

    Like, when I get a message of “I caught your husband sleeping with a younger woman!” I know to expect a photo of my darling passed out on the couch being a baby pillow.

    Or we harass our teen girls about being cliche children who drink candy coffee and play on their phones while they wait to hang out with their buddies, rather than volunteering at a church group to feed the homeless.

    ….yes their friends are in the same youth group and yes they did have fun at the volunteer event.

    But if you get good at that, you can make it really satisfying in a story when the POV character initially goes “oh, no, wait that makes no sense-” and then it’s shown how it really does. But you have to make it pay off.

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