No. I’m not leaving quite yet. It gets closer day-by-day, but I haven’t had my final call yet. Actually, I was wondering about the length of a book. How long is too long? (as the bishop said to the actress).

‘It’s as long as it needs to be’. ‘It’s as long as it is.’ Fair enough. And if thousands of readers know and love your work it probably can be. If you’re unknown, or relatively unknown and books in that genre are typically 50K… and yours is 400K – well, being unusual might make it a buy. But the genre plainly sells a lot of 50K books – that’s the expectation. Equally much if they were settling down to a great summer goat-gagger, and found it was a novella. Finding expectations not lived up to, is death to your future sales with that reader, and, because people can be amazingly spiteful when they spent $4.99… and didn’t get exactly what they wanted.

Why I am thinking about this is my current WIP – aimed at 10-14 year olds (so, ideally 50K IMO) is at 70K… and could have (depending on direction I take) 30K to 70K more). And the first real ‘break point’ possible is at 70K (not end, just ‘break’, with the annoying need for a ‘set-up’ section explaining the first half (complex) if the book is to be split.

I was wondering if the best was to finish it, and offer it in two halves (costing more) or both costing more than 1 but less than two?

What are your thoughts? And what lengths do you feel readers expect of different genres.

I’m off island for medical reasons in a few hours’ time, but I look forward to your ideas when I get back.

5 responses to “So long (and thanks for all the fish)”

  1. To me, it looks like you have a choice between aiming for the 80k total and then cutting it down to something only a little outside genre parameters (say, 65k), or going for the 120k total and promoting it as a serialized work of maybe three parts with overt (and maybe humorous?) cliffhangers until part three. probably priced a bit lower than average for the genre.

  2. At that age my kids read Harry Potter. I read Lord of the Rings. I suggest you make it one book and charge 1.5 of the normal book “cost”.

  3. I think qzzt has a point. And since you’ve written other books for this age group you can market this one as longer, deliberately. Then you won’t get the annoyance. You might even thrill your fans…. More Dave Freer!

  4. When somebody asked Abraham Lincoln how long a man’s legs should be, his answer was “Long enough to reach the ground.”

    How long should a book be? Long enough to tell the story. The book is simply a vehicle. It needs to be big enough to haul the required load.

    Other than that, don’t ask me. I tried to write a short story; it wound up over 30,000 words long. I did better on my second try: only 14,000 words. Yay. 😁

    My primary current WIP (out of the 4 I’m working on) has chapters over 10,000 words long. Because that’s what it takes to tell that part of the story. Chapter 1 is over 12,000 words. Because I can’t say what I want to say in fewer words, and there’s no logical place to break it into smaller pieces. It’s a single scene.
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    Nobody expects the Spanish Inquisition!!

  5. It may surprise you yet. I’d finish it before I made plans.

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